I once again salute your service!
I listened over the full track list and here is some of the items I came up with for feedback:
I really wish there were more instruments involved! I think you have an excellent basis for adding musical ideas into the existing ones here. Piano and Pads certainly make a good couple, but if there isnt many other instruments involved, you gotta make sure that your pads have interesting texture changes/evolutions or make sure the piano has interesting character. It sounds like a lot of thought went into the instrument choices here, but not necessarily into making a ton of changes to the instruments.
I think mid way through crossing the water when the strings came in was Wonderful. I was hoping for them to build up a bit further.
Overall, what you have here is a great platform for more complex ideas. I want to see you build a house on top of that platform.
Now that the feedback is done, I do want to say this entry is very pretty to listen to. It makes me wish I had another 10 songs from you here. I think they convey emotion well and I can feel your storytelling in the music (Be proud and lean into that aspect of your writing!) Your sound design/choice of instruments was great and you really made something worth investing time into.
I think you did a great job and I wouldnt be rating you highly if I didnt think so.
Great work and congratulations on completing this wonderful set of music!