Me likey the overall VN-like vibes and I think you've managed to achieve that aspect! It feels like I'm playing an old-school VN, almost like a retro feel like the other comments have said.
One criticism though, which admittedly is very subjective and heavily based on preference, is I think the mix feels a bit too washed out, could be because of the reverb and overall instruments levelling. Based on the story context, it's supposed to be an intimate and emotional story which usually needs an element of intimacy and nearness. To create those feelings, in my personal opinion I think it's better to focus on just a few instruments and let them really shine. Take for instance in "Come With Me", the drums, pad, and piano to me all feel like they're trying to overtake each other therefore it feels a bit "washed out", I think it would be much better if say you pick the piano as the main focus and really play with the melody to maximize the emotional impact.
A trick to make instruments feel "closer" to your ears is by playing around with its transient. Generally louder transient will make a sound feel closer and vice versa. Although this method works better with instruments with little-to-no sustain and fast attack, like plucks or drums/percs.
However again, it's all subjective matter and really dependent on the vision itself. If the core feeling that you want to achieve is an ephemeral feeling instead of nearness, then never mind what I've just said because I think this "washed out" type of mix would work really well!