I played this version, didn't quite understand, then I played the completed version and really really liked the concept of it! But my big applause goes for the art! What is this aaaart, so fcking beautiful! I don't know why, but it gave me some Alice in Wonderland vibes. Good job by building a feel like this!
Unfortunately, since this is the version you did for the Game Jam, I can't give you a high rating.
If I may, a more intuitive tutorial or quick way to learn how to play would be awesome, a lot of text like this tends to make people run away and I am afraid some people may started playing it, saw the big tutorial text and gave up playing it...