This is very unique. I love the jazzy vibe of In The Lounge, and I love the use of real instruments, especially for a theme where most of others went for digital.
I'm not sure if it's an intention or not, so apologise me if it is and I just don't understand it, but - from what I hear, I believe getting broader understanding of drums would push you forward a long way. You clearly have a lot of music talent and skills, but the drums felt chaotic, and probably not fully the way you intended. Which contrasted with the other instruments' neat arrangements.
That's just for some constructive feedback. Loved your take on the theme, it was memorable and had a some very good storytelling. Great job.