Nice take, I actually listened to the 2nd track by accident without knowing it was the one you felt was rushed. Well I could not tell, I actually liked it. The pitch automation was an interesting touch that made the track more "wavy" and "bubbly" it increased the feeling of the theme imo. First track was super neat too, very nice chords, you should include a chart with the chord progression there is some very nice colour there. Good job ;)
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I appreciate it! The 2nd track i'd say is rushed mainly because i would have preferred it to be longer with some other melodic sections (the second half turned out pretty cool but it was more of a fast and cheap way to make the track a bit longer).
If you're interested in the chord progression of the 1st track, it goes like this:
First theme:
AbM7 (the very first time in the piece it's a Cm7 instead)| Bbm7 - Am7 - E7 | Eb7 | Fm7
F# | B7 | Bbm7 | Eb7
Second theme (the bossa nova one):
FM7 | Gm7 | AbM7 | Eb
Dm7 | Am7 | GbM7/Bb | C7
The second time (before the first theme comes back again) the last 2 chords are Bbm7 | Eb7 instead