Aykm (Are you kidding me???)
Well, hopefully you can find something useful in there. I could always write a more detailed review later, after I finished, just so you know. ;)
I don't know for how much longer the game goes on, but I had to write it now. This could possibly be the best written visual novel, I've ever read. No Joke. Everyone knows Tennis Ace, Echo, Extracurricular Activities, Morenatsu, Repeat, Adastra, maybe WSSAP (Wolfstar Sins and Paradise) too and many more ...So, after having read the fate of Reamus for a while now, I'm pretty much certain [Pervader] takes it up a notch. The story flows along, draws you right in and is just really captivating.
I wonder, if you can beat Major\Minor to it. That game is indeed a visual novel, though there's no romance involving the protagonist. The speciality lays in it's relatively dark (not as dark as Echo, as a way point), fantastic fantasy story.
Well, back to your game. I simply love it, and think about supporting you on Patreon, like I have done and do for a few other visual novel creators.
If you can keep up the quality of the writing, that I believe you can, then you are on making something magnificent. The premise is at least as good as, and reminds me of Project Aego, for some reason. A game, which is no longer in development sadly. Now that I braught PA up, I have to ask. Is Pervader going to be a horror game, or have horror elements? I actually like horror to some extent, but please... No more Echo-like horror! (And there's even a prequel *shudder*) I would go so far to calling it on a similar level frightening, as Lovecraftian horror, because there's no hoping of a better future either, so to say. Although, Call of Cthulhu is a great game. And yes, I also like Lovecraftian, a lot, but not with romance... A happy ending is a must-have in a love story, don't you think? If there's one good one then there can be as many atrocious one's as needed.
Wait, Ahh I see. A comment down under spoilers it. In the end, I don't have to ask at least. ^^
I can't believe I've got so lucky, to have found Pervader, when it was launched only a day ago... You honestly should make this pay to play, but the fact you don't makes the game propably even better for most.
~from Germany, as we say: I wish you success! (not luck, or let's say both, if that sounds better)
PS: Everyone in search for more visual novels of the same kind, look on my profile. It has pretty much all good furry VN's itch has to offer. ;) (Of course there are more outside of itch, some I do know of as well) Tell me, should I have missed some.
I still have to play tons, tons which can only be played on a pc, yeah....