Nooooooo, I failed to notice that this is only a demo x'D curses! 12 more days to wait... *sob*
Interesting story! A lot of difficult grammar for me but it's also educational and somewhat refreshing o.o (I need to widen my dictionary!)
The font for the textbox is slightly hard to read since the 'a' is similar to an 'o', 'g' is similar with 'q' but it does suits the sci-fi theme! Ah the dilemma ><
The art and backgrounds are also awesome :'D love the semi-realism style! All of you have worked hard and you deserved a pat on your backs for this!
Overall, I can't wait for the full version! :'D