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Thanks a lot for playing and for the detailed comment! I’m really glad the visuals worked for you, since my drawing skills are pretty basic and I had to get creative with the approach. You’re right about the tone shifts. That was something I noticed and tried to smooth out for this version, but I think it could still use a little more work. The title was meant to set up one thing and then pull the rug a bit, so the protagonist’s change would feel sharper. I get it might not land the same for everyone.

Really appreciate you taking the time to dig into it, thanks again!

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The protagonist is allowed to shift, it's an absolutely amazing way to direct the story. I quite liked it, in fact. Quite unfortunately, I have seen way too many stories that, as you said, "pulled the rug" to do a plot twist.

Either way, good luck with the jam. Hope you place in it!