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Played the full version. It was good. The atmosphere was definitely thrilling. The deliberate use of color (or lack thereof) was amazing. I think this is a brilliant showcase that even if drawing is not your strong suit, you can remix the graphical assets in interesting ways that make your project unique and strong on its own.

I still wish there was a way for the reader/player to interact with the game more than fast-forwarding through the story for more immersion.

The only things I didn't really like were that

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the personality shifts/transformations were too abrupt, which briefly took me out of the immersion, and the main mystery wasn't solved, which made me feel that the title was misleading in a bad way.

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Overall still a great game, though.

Thanks a lot for playing and for the detailed comment! I’m really glad the visuals worked for you, since my drawing skills are pretty basic and I had to get creative with the approach. You’re right about the tone shifts. That was something I noticed and tried to smooth out for this version, but I think it could still use a little more work. The title was meant to set up one thing and then pull the rug a bit, so the protagonist’s change would feel sharper. I get it might not land the same for everyone.

Really appreciate you taking the time to dig into it, thanks again!

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The protagonist is allowed to shift, it's an absolutely amazing way to direct the story. I quite liked it, in fact. Quite unfortunately, I have seen way too many stories that, as you said, "pulled the rug" to do a plot twist.

Either way, good luck with the jam. Hope you place in it!