Hi,
Happy to hear you like the story so far! Very honored to be among your favorites :D
Perfectly valid criticism. I do perhaps overindulge in POV:s since I rather like writing them :D But as I one of the posts about C3 said, I think here, there are some problems with the pacing due to this habit :D
I think after C2 I asked a poll about povs in which majority of people were ok with them or indifferent at the very least :D But of course, many more people now. And I think that was specifically about when MC is "coping." I found it, here.
Perhaps I will do another poll at somet point :D