I've been following this story for a few months now and I have to say I really love it and it's quickly become one of my favorite IFs! My only complaint is that I do feel we get a bit too many pov switches. I do enjoy pov switches in moderation and when they contribute to the story, but I don't really feel like all of the ones we get do that necessarily
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Hi,
Happy to hear you like the story so far! Very honored to be among your favorites :D
Perfectly valid criticism. I do perhaps overindulge in POV:s since I rather like writing them :D But as I one of the posts about C3 said, I think here, there are some problems with the pacing due to this habit :D
I think after C2 I asked a poll about povs in which majority of people were ok with them or indifferent at the very least :D But of course, many more people now. And I think that was specifically about when MC is "coping." I found it, here.
Perhaps I will do another poll at somet point :D
I would say that the best way to use POVs is to show those of the characters present with the MC and outside of those situations (and the interludes obviously) only on occasions like Lexia's POVs in The first and second chapters and Havard's at the beginning of the third, honestly the POVs seem like a good resource to me but somewhat complicated to use