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Excellent Introduction.   Enjoyed it a lot.   The character banter is the star of this so far.   A great mix of fun and romance.  Will be playing more when it's available.

Some feedback and thoughts:

Please turn on the renpy back function.  I think I’ve seen you already say this is planned but adding to the request.

The choice prompts with only a single choice feel a little why is this done this way.

I’m probably in the minority but I liked and enjoyed the scenes with Jade and Noemi.   The banter was good and interesting.  Characters are allowed to have joy independent of the MC being in the scene.  

Like the look of the roadmap and planned themes.   Clarification of BDSM is on the list but you don’t explicitly put in Maledom with that though most people probably assume that is the direction.

Some concern of dropping into the open world setup.  A lot of sandboxes feel like they blunt the narrative momentum of the story.  And the linear story in the intro has been a good flow and feel.   Would hate to feel like that got lost going forward.

Final note on communication.  You do not currently have a discord or a free tier on Patreon which are the main ways I get creator updates pushed out to me.  So right now I need to remember to come back and check on the game periodically to check and see if there are updates.  Don’t know if it’s worth your time but something to consider.

Once again I enjoyed it.   Thanks for the work you put into this, and look forward to more.

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Rollback noted, choices will be made better in 1.1 with small diffrent outcomes. Rn added them mostly so my adhd homie playtester would not whine about not having things to click. From 1.1 they will matter more. 

Jade and Noe intro is still here just for building their character background and set up their arrivals into the harem and i planned it in a way that i think will make people happy.
Bdsm will definitelly be both ways. Dom women are my kryptonite. 

Bout map. Yeah... i am thinking about it heavily after feedback on my writing and people liking it. Probably the way to go is add semi open sections in some plot points and leave the open world free to explore when the story of the update ends.

I will deliver like a 1 dollar tier for people who just want to see some release posts and discord access, to not accumulate spam accounts.

Thanks for a nice feedback. Can't wait to deliver more.

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Lol, I can definately see the button to click design choice in that framing.  Follow up question on the BDSM for your answer.   Is your dynamic one way with a specific character?   Or will you switch back and forth with the same character?

Can't spoil so much. You would have to join the ride and see for yourself hehe.