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Whoa, this is super impressive! I've had a lot of experience with RPG Maker(s) and know first hand how tough some of those tricks can be. Loved the reflection trick and burning charms! From a purely game design standpoint, I was happy you made it clear what was actually important to investigate/click on and what was just story fluff. The artwork is great, and the level design was crazy good! So much of it too! Even the fade in effect in the very beginning looked super good. Also impressive that you were able to do away with 100% of the combat mechanics that most RPG Maker games ship with. Again, that's harder than it sounds. 

Overall, a pretty darn good entry! Matched most of the themes perfectly and even had an intriguing story. I assume you ran out of time given the ending, but it still got me thinking about what's actually going on. My only major critiques, and they're more quality of life things, is that I would prefer to use WASD controls rather than arrow, and some of the text streamed by too quickly, especially during cutscenes. I'm not a very fast reader on the best of days, so it was a shame to miss that. But other than that, a job well done! :D

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I'm so glad you enjoyed the game and I really love hearing your feedback about how you felt during the game! 

As for the endings, both were planned out since the start and were what I had envisioned with the project. Depending on which ending you received and whether you saw the optional cutscenes, you gained more context into what was happening. But I myself am satisfied and I'm glad you had fun with the game.

For the quality of life suggestions, I'll keep in mind how fast some of the dialogue goes in the future and implement a backlog for text just in case. As for the WASD controls, I'm not sure if I'll add those in my future games, as it's an extra plugin, and depending on the game, I sometimes use those buttons for other controls.


Thank you again for your wonderful feedback and thank you for playing.