The art style is beautiful, a fantastic visual novel. I wish it was longer (of course, with such a short time in a jam, I get why it isn't). The sound effects and music were great for atmosphere.
I am not sure if my browser messed something up, but the art was pretty far to the right. I felt like I was missing half of the image, but no knocks to you; I think that was a problem on my end. really fun!!