This is hands down the most personal entry I've seen in the Jam. You made me laugh and almost tear up. It also works perfectly with the background song. Really well done, sir! :)
I really liked the visual style, though I noticed some elements (like the lamps) seemed upside down. I’m not sure if that was intentional, but for me, they actually worked well with the overall tone of the experience.
On a technical note, I had quite a few issues trying to play the game in the browser. A few days ago, I sent a message about a memory error while loading the game, but I removed it because the next day I was able to load it, though I didn’t have time to really play. Since then, I haven’t been able to get it working in the browser, so I ended up downloading the Windows version instead.