Hey! Great job on participating & submitting your game to the jam ^_^
Here’s my humble feedback:
What I liked: I couldn't play as it need extra downloads but I'm impressed that this is done in Roblox engine! loved the mechanics and visual effects, not sure how much of it is ready to use in Roblox engine but well done!
What could be improved: More depth to the store and background story, i felt lost watching the video, nice puzzles but it was basic puzzles that can be found in many other games.
Overall impression: Impressed but it felt more like a tech demo.