thanks a lot I really appreciate you taking the time to watch the video and give feedback!
I actually had more complex puzzles planned but the erbil site leader recommended that puzzles be kept simple so the judges could finish the game easily. even with simpler puzzles people typically took about 20–35 minutes to solve them.
I left out the full story on purpose so I wouldnt spoil the experience, I wanted players to discover the plot themselves while exploring. For example a door closing as you enter the last segment of the train or when you leave an area, footsteps on the roof, or the sound of objects falling combined with a small jumpscare, these sounds and events are not mentioned in the story so players can notice them while playing. I will try to add more depth to the story by including some backstory and details.
none of the assets are ready to use in Roblox Studio. I downloaded free 3D models from sites like sketchfab and added them to roblox engine. many ready made assets in roblox make the game look worse so I didn't use them.
Thanks again for the kind words and the critique I really appreciated it!