This felt very free jazz-y and fusion, at least for the first part. I don't really see what it has all to do with the theme, it feels very out of place.
The second section had interesting ideas, though some janky composition at times as well as rhythm that don't seem much controlled.
While I do like your jazzy ideas, I'm not really convinced by your submission, though it is decently mixed. Avantgardisme can fit sometimes, but it's a rather risky decision when it comes to ambient works.
Much support and love !