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Thank you so much for your review!

I'll try to add more save points in the next update, along with fixing the crash issue.

I'm also planning to find a proofreader, but I don't know any native speakers at the moment ;; Still, I definitely want the text to be cleaned up before the full release, so I'll keep that in mind!
If you happen to catch any typos I missed, it would really help a lot—of course, only if it's not too much trouble!

Thank you for playing! I'm really, really happy you're enjoying it so far. It means a lot and really motivates me—thank you!

I sent an email with my doc of the typos I've spotted so far. It's still a work in progress, so I'll be updating it as time goes on. If there's any issues with sharing a Google doc to a Yahoo account, please tell me so I can send you an alternate file.

And, just in case, let me say it here too: I'm willing to be your proofreader if you need a native English speaker. Even if you decide to pick someone else as your proofreader, I'll still send over the list of typos, because I want to help make your work the best it can be.

Again, thank you for your hard work! I can't wait to see where this story goes.

I'm so sorry for the late reply! I recently started a new job, so things have been a bit hectic.

I was able to access the document without any issues. I just looked through it, and it’s incredibly helpful!

Thank you so much for your support and generous offer! It truly means a lot to me, and I really appreciate the time and effort you’ve put into this.
That said, I’m currently unable to offer any compensation, and with my inconsistent schedule, I worry I might not be able to make the most of your help. I’d hate to inconvenience you with proofreading under those circumstances.

Still, I’m very grateful for your input so far — it’s a huge help!

It's alright!

I haven't been able to update the document much lately, but I'm glad it was of use to you!

I didn't do this expecting compensation, so please don't worry about it! I think your story is good and I don't mind inconsistent updates on it, I'd just like to offer my help proofreading whenever you've got something done. If you're willing to let me, of course!