This was absolutely amazing! The choice menus, menus, and text effects were so impressive, I found myself stunned to learn that they were made in Ren'py, I didn't know that was even possible in the engine. The art is beautiful and I'm intrigued by the plot. I ended up using most of the save slots trying to 100% complete the demo to find out all I could about this world. The characters are very interesting too! And the notes menu was just impressive, though I did get a crash message when I tried to open page 2 of the contacts.
I'm so excited for the full release!
My one complaint is that the English is a bit difficult to understand at points. I know English isn't your first language, so maybe it'd be a good idea to get a proofreader? I could also send you a list of typos I've noticed if that would help.
All in all, thank you for the amazing experience!