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H-Have you actually played this? What wolf? Do you mean Loken the husky? 

It's explained later on WHY the MC understand their language. 

The MC has no memories but does have his subconsious memories. Amnesia USUALLY effects explicit memory (conscious recall of events and facts), but not always implicit memory (unconscious knowledge and skills). This is the most common form of how amnesia effects the mind.

People travel to and from the area where they live, they aren't completely blind to oceans existing. 

Saying axes and shields as primitive technology is true considering the MC know about AI and an age of technology.

Also, please use paragraphs or just breaks. You're massive wall of text is difficult and painful to read through.

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I was three quarters joking about it all lol, i really dont have many gripes with the story at all. I rather enjoy it! It has inspired me to write a similar project of my own. But ill double down for fun! 

Axes require mining for metals which requires a mine, smelting metals, pouring melted metals into a mold, cutting and polishing metals, it requires woodworking and adhesives which requires more metal and well- you get the point. My main issue isnt with the axes. 

Either way, he shouldnt be surprised the husky is 30 something years old because it was one of the first things the AI explained as we awaken. 

Another problem that persists with me is the endomorphic body description bring incorrect thing, which is still like a mosquito bite that won't stop itching but only when you bother it, so thats a thing i have a gripe with

Thats about it though, not much else i can complain about as far as ive gotten. At least nothing close to beung worth typing out and making a point of.

We could get semantical about a lot of things and argue that, for example about axes, we see no sci fi technology (apart from the crypod), and everything we have today is all we see artifacts of, and we dont consider wheels as primitive tech and theyre just as prevelant as axes and shields in our day, which are used throughout all walks of life and therefore arent primitive but rather could be argued that they are "simple", but certainly not simple to make. Theyre simple as in how a car wheel is simple. Calling that primitive just isnt a true reflection of what it is. But i dont think thats worth even debating about lol. 

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You make it sound like axes can't be made without industrial tech. Copper bladed axes where found dating back to 4000BC in egypt, bronze axes at 2200BC in england and ireland, Iron axes at 800BC. An axe is very much primitive tech. Primitive tech is anything that can be made without modern day tools or materials.

A cart wheel is primitive. A car wheel is not.

Primitive tech actually has a definition. It's not just a nebulous idea. 

Car wheels require modern day manufacturing. Steel production needed for it was only about the 1800s.