For a demo, this story seems to be going in an interesting direction! You did great for your first RPG Maker game.
However, just a couple of things that could be improved would be;
- Make interactable objects more obvious (maybe with some sort of highlighting when near an object or a simple icon on top of the head to show that something is interactable).
- Some of the collisions in the map are a little strange (The hitbox on the staircase, for example).
- The scream FX is a little too loud.
Other than that, not much to critique. The art and the music are amazing! Looking forward to seeing the project blossom!
This is amazing feedback thank you so much! I see what you mean about the interact able objects, I’d like to make them more noticeable as I see there are dialogue parts that were missed. So I’ll definitely do that ! I’m so happy you enjoyed the game, I hope you stay tuned with a future update for the story!! This was a challenge for me and I’m so happy that I was able to make a good story < 3