The game flowed well and was interesting. It was at the end of my stream so I was already a bit tired voice wise, but I was still able to read it out without much issue, which in general means I think it reads well. If something is super wordy, or just awkward to read that will no doubt come out when I'm reading it, but I just had fun with it.
I also knew that I was rushing down a bad path, but I couldn't resist. I didn't have a lot of time to check out multiple routes, but I def had fun going down the route I did. You did really well with this, and thank you for sharing your story.