Post by HornyAxolotl in Twelve Mental Patients Demo comments

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So... Music 1/5 even if its trying to be eeri for the horror sake it feels too much in the nose about it graphics 1/5 Map is too empty walls feel out of place and too many twist and turns just to enter rooms in the same hallway, plus carrying the body looked out of place Gamplay 1/5 Looks like its trying to be similar to pick up someone bring them to assinged room, but you need to unlock the rooms to attend them? seems easy to soft lock or hardlock, on top of that no way this doesnt need a introduction instructions are unclear, plus error on the menu wich affects on enjoyment on general good attempt but try again, you can improve and its cool that you made this by yourself but polish you basics

Plus apply for jams that are under this gen saw multiple submisions for the sake of submitting but nothing to do with the jams you applied for

Rybon140 days ago(-2)

I can see you didn’t really play this game at all if you’re rating it that low. The music in this game is actually great. As for the graphics, well, not everyone likes this kind of style, but if you think the map is empty, then I don’t know, maybe you’re just blind. And you know, if there weren’t those corridors, the map would look like a football field. When it comes to gameplay, it’s pretty obvious that when you start and light the furnace, your task is to kill the patients and throw them into it

HornyAxolotl140 days ago

I mean no harm in just giving my perspective, as a dev you understand what your intentions were but as a player I’m letting you know what I see, hope you don’t take it in a bad way and look for ways to improve

CelestialStudio139 days ago (2 edits)

Can you not take critisicm? This person is being kind and you are literally insulting them.

By the way the music is not great when it comes to the music theory behind it. It disobeys every single thing taught in music class (if the composer took it). You are using multiple minor seconds not even in a melodic way or to support the chord. The chormatic bass line would fit if the melody wasn't just going F - E - F - E (Fa - Mi - Fa - Mi if you use Solfege). And it spends awhile on a tritone which in this context DOES NOT FIT.

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