Listen. I need you to listen to me. If you are a plural system and you're struggling with internal dysfunction like this, you've gotta make it a serious priority to get all of your members on the same page. I mean it—ALL of them! You need to communicate, collaborate, and compromise, not try to hog the front or repress your fellow headmates! Otherwise, it's gonna be YOU chained up in some rapist cokehead's basement next, doing a lot of painful finding out after one of your errant alters fucked around!
And speaking of which, I'd say this VN does a great job of underscoring that point~ The plural writing here feels very lived and authentic, which is certainly refreshing to see, heheheh. There's also a ton of careful attention to detail in the art, which I deeply appreciated: Seeing all of the slight differences in Zuzka's positions and poses from scene to scene, with her body language mirroring that of the current front, was an absolute delight~
Though, frankly, I was surprised that Kamila stuck around for as long as she did, between Aleks's abrasive attempts at manipulation and Mira being a pill while doing a clumsy job at communicating with her—not that Kamila was exactly Girlfriend of the Year material herself, heh. I can only imagine how many more interactions like that they'd had before the start of the game... though, for all of Kamila's faults, Monika made her look like an angel by comparison, heheheheh~
But yes, great work! I had a lot of fun reading this one~
P.S.: Shout out to my girl Kornelia for saving the day!