Really interesting premise! The writing really sucked me in. I’m not usually a fan of more abrasive MCs, but I’m intrigued to see how this MC can change depending on my choices. I look forward to seeing how this game develops! :)
A few possible glitches I noticed:
- I would hit escape in the middle of a conversation so I could save and instead be teleported back to port.
- I wish characters would remember what you already said to them. I would sometimes click on a character thinking they might have new dialogue choices only for all the options to be the same as before - and for them not to react if I said exactly the same thing as last time.
- It would be nice if you showed how much time different actions takes.
Anyway, looking forward to seeing how you polish this game up for the Kickstarter! :D