Beautiful game(again). The story expanded so well from the first part to create this amazing story overall. Thanks so much for expanding on this experience.
About the game's improvements: The difficulty feels much more balanced now. The additional platforms made the platformer itself much more forgiving, and the new levels are also a great addition to this game. When I was playing the part 1 version, I thought of a fading screen---And I did not expect a full on burning animation! In addition, I really loved the portal & flame particles(although I don't really get how you did that).
Story wise: Wow. just wow. this is truly art. The story shifted very well on the expanded pages, and it was a great read. Amazing, as always.