First up, the content improvement is really fantastic. The falling feels much more challenging with way more different obstacles. I really loved how the narrator was set as well. The dialogues brings a really nice bit of humor. (Thanks for the reference of my game haha! I included a reference to your game in my game as well---although a bit subtle)
With some tweaks, it is much more fun to fall & dodge obstacles in this version! As I said, freefall games are always one of the most enjoyable minigame genres I have played---and this game is definitely one of the more enjoyable ones in the category. It feels really balanced so that there are many moments where I narrowly avoid a restart---and that is the thrilling part of it! It took me a couple of restarts(4-5) to get to the end, but it just gave me more time to enjoy the dialogues haha.
I know it is not your fault and I will not deduct any of my ratings, but I think the full screen & the ui is a bit buggy in my browser. I don't know the exact cause, but the interaction ui always seemed to be at the corner & the game will not full screen back sometimes. However, these are outside technical issues we can't control :)