Great characterisation of DeSousa here, to create a convincing and compelling villain in such a short space is no easy task. I would love an extended version of this featuring more of DeSousa and her motivations, and more of the missionaries settlement and eventual take over of Calamvor, so as to give more context to the epilogue.
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Oh yeah, I really wish I could have a bunch more backstory. I find the Angelic Kingdoms to be fascinating antagonists of sorts in general, and was happy to include them here. If we had had two pages… ah, but that would miss the purpose, wouldn’t it?
Glad you liked Elnora’s villain arc! I had a lot of fun with it.