Good layout, if unorthodox. I like the story. I understand the idea to stand out, but I would have preferred the standard layout. I did find the last two chapters a little vague for my taste. Still a myth worth keeping around.
Thanks, truly! The intention isn't to stand out, but to make it fit on 2 A5 if need be. The 6th omen is vague for sure, but I didn't aim for the 5th one to be as well. What contributes to that most?
