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Finally back up. Sorry for any headaches. 

Sorry for the mixup. I'm new to the Itch io stuff. 

Okay this is the most Ambitious submission I've seen in this jam. Most ambitious by far. I need more time to look over it.  But I am excited to see some warfare and gamified map rules. 

Good layout, if unorthodox. I like the story. I understand the idea to stand out, but I would have preferred the standard layout.  I did find the last two chapters a little vague for my taste.  Still a myth worth keeping around. 

While I am not certain how simple this would be to use, I think this is perfect for the Solo campaign I want to play. 

I think the idea of randomly wandering and finding a single Hex of Ocean would be very silly.  Also now I need to look up what a Tepia and Tiaga are. 

Incredible art, and ideas.  A Knight who dies and is reborn every season!?  I honestly don't know how I feel about it. 

The Myths are very pretty and you can tell Barse(?) didn't skimp on the vocabulary or enthusiasm. They truly love the poetry of the system, and I enjoy how they use it. 

Truly the only thing I would change is the last thing the Flood Knight saw to something like "Only Darkness" 

There is a whole lot here!  

The map is pretty there is a lot of dense information kept brief and easy to use. 

As an experienced player I am a little disappointed that it starts with several Myth suggestions already in place. 
However any new GM wanting to try this system who is feeling particularly overwhelmed would get a lot out of this product.  Very nice, and beautifully put together! <3

I am quite proud of this piece, but as it was the first one I have published on this platform it would not be too difficult to improve upon it.  Suggestions, Critiques, and Additions welcome.