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This is great. Super easy to read and it seems like it would be easy to run. The locale and the NPCs are very flavorful, as well as their items / reactions etc. I do wish the Marquis and Mirabel were a little more fleshed out—I can imagine they would be very popular with my players, but it’s not clear why they are here and whether they would help the PCs. Obviously that’s a call I can make, but I just felt like you have something in mind and I would love to have that info!

Great adventure, easy to read, seems like a blast. If you get the chance, you could make a printer-friendly version without the colored pages :-)

Thank you! A B&W version is probably a great idea, as I do agree that the background page effect was a lil dark. As for the NPCs, absolutely- that was the part that got sacrificed for space reasons, and I had a whole table for guests that didn’t make the cut. If I do an expanded version, that’s definitely where I’m gonna start!