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I think this could be a fun game, but it's hard for me to tell. A little bit of feedback:

I suspect the "odds" chart is wrong -- -2 says "Slim chance. Roll 3 dice, and choose the best result." and you probably mean "choose the worst result"?
"if it takes to much effort to justify" should be "if it takes too much effort to justify"
" (or you injury yourself)" --> " (or you injure yourself)"
Generally probably want to run a basic grammar check on this. =(
I appreciate the printable tri-fold format, but please provide one for screen reading as well -- it's really very confusing to try to make sense of things without printing.

Thankyou for this... I thought I caught most of the issues in the text before my final conversion to the pdf.

I can see what you're saying on the last point, however this sequence of games is very much "tri-fold" based. trying to get that feel with a screen is something I haven't managed yet, especially where some of the other games in the series rely on the tactile elements and folds of the piece. For non-"trifold manifesto" games, I'll definitely be generating more screen friendly versions.

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