Thankyou for this... I thought I caught most of the issues in the text before my final conversion to the pdf.
I can see what you're saying on the last point, however this sequence of games is very much "tri-fold" based. trying to get that feel with a screen is something I haven't managed yet, especially where some of the other games in the series rely on the tactile elements and folds of the piece. For non-"trifold manifesto" games, I'll definitely be generating more screen friendly versions.