I was very charmed by the art and music in this VN! In particular, I've a soft spot for pixel art, and the colors and animations alike for the portraits were delightful~
When Dinah asked Fritz, "Why are you like this?", I felt that, lol. Is it really any wonder why you're the one having to be the guinea pig for the magic tears, you damn fail girl?
On that note, I would've loved to see more backstory for her and Dinah; to witness in detail, say, the incident that led to Fritz getting cursed, to understand how these girls ended up the way they are, you know? And similarly, I'd love to see more scenes like the one where Fritz puts aside her usual bullshit to be kinder towards Dinah, to see them both start to grow and change in response to each other—even if it's not all ultimately for the better, such as them getting fed up with the other's shit or what have you, heh heh.
Nevertheless, nice work! Like Selene, I enjoyed watching these girls ricochet off each other, heheheh~