So so so so pretty!! I really liked this one last time. While it was a little bare in the non-written aspects, the narrative and tone were nailed: and the game was super funny to boot :D
I really like the changes you've made with this iteration. The added sections when flying add some complexity to story that is otherwise mostly focused on the jokes and a little less on the implied themes from the one way trip. The clouds and optional pausing in these moments I feel super super add to this. I would honestly just sit with myself for a while chewing on the journey that I was embarking on and stooping into a more contemplative mood. It was incredibly effective at evoking the particular mood pointed to by the dialogue.
That's all to say that I really like your changes :P