I'm a big fan of this story. Your prose is polished, and it's really a feat to cram this much story into the word count while keeping it so well-organized.
Thanks for the compliments! About 13 years ago someone told me "Writing is rewriting" and I've never forgotten it - but yeah, having the story bouncing around in my head in 4 scenes was the easy part, making it fit into 1,000 words and one page was the tricky bit! Good luck to you too! :)
