0: it is really cool! Ok so, I like that bug people are kinda the villains, but do not care enough to fight the players, but even on the dream??? Probably they could have an action to wake up too violent AND Too tricky PCs in case they need to defend themselves, no stats touched but no treasure neither. (also uhhh maybe a solution to stop people from getting in the whole dream place after the adventure might be a nice extra info uwu)
- Theme: On brand, on place, on everything!
- Writing: It is a nice story, it is clear but uh... but being frank, i am not a fan of the font.
- Layout: Simple layout, Sometimes you only need that
- Art: Public Access art for that special feeling
- Playability: Will really need some prep work or have everything ready in a VTT for this.