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sometimes, you gotta include that kind of rules, specially if you are gonna mess with their movement hahaha

When I get digital adventures in itchio or drivethru, I usually feel like:

Man, this thing is great! But all the art is in the PDF, there is no tokens i can use in VTTs, the maps I need to Printscreen them from the book as well. I know there are small stuff but I wanted to add all this just to make it easier for the DM who is usually who gets this stuff for their players!

He was there in Weird Stories, so it was an obvious choice for a sea adventure

Honestly, 0: i do enjoy the vibe from this, nice work!!

0: it is a nice adventure, a lot of the tables are great, but it kinda gives a lack of a general direction for the story...?

Actually I do have a question, what is the sludge?? Is poison? It will turn the PCs into snake people too? Who is the Lamia? A dark pact is mentioned, but not a lot is mentioned of the evil Lamia 

• Theme: Really really nice and on theme!
• Writing: I like the story it presented, but... leaves kinda a lot to the DM/players imagination
• Layout: It is great, I love it. Really easy to read! 
• Art:  Sometimes, It just works
• Playability: Assembly is required as mentioned

0: it is really cool! Ok so, I like that bug people are kinda the villains, but do not care enough to fight the players, but even on the dream??? Probably they could have an action to wake up too violent AND Too tricky PCs in case they need to defend themselves, no stats touched but no treasure neither. (also uhhh maybe a solution to stop people from getting in the whole dream place after the adventure might be a nice extra info uwu) 

• Theme: On brand, on place, on everything!
• Writing: It is a nice story, it is clear but uh... but being frank, i am not a fan of the font.
• Layout: Simple layout, Sometimes you only need that
• Art: Public Access art for that special feeling
• Playability:  Will really need some prep work or have everything ready in a VTT for this. 

Thanks! I really like the ending i did for it too!

Awww man thanks, i woulda prefer a lil more artwork in my submission but usually that woulda mean I had to get custom stuff for it. 

Honestly, yeah I kinda felt the same way, not enough hooks honestly, I felt 4 pages were my doom in this case, as there is a lot of Dungeons who uses the 3 available pages (plus Cover) to explain everything important and I had to use part of that space to explain the mystery, the town, the setting and the final dungeon DX

Its not really a complain, but I might do this adventure in a extended version with all the missing details I think it needs

Perfect for halloween hahaha!

It might be a one shot, but honestly nothing is stoping any DM to run this as slow as possible, maybe ranking up the tension with each day with more missing people

Thanks! Hahahah i was thinking more in a Fish Diagram with that dungeon hahahah

Underwater themed in more than one way!

question, does Community/review copies can work as well for the judges to check the submissions?

Community/Review Copies are available!

Question, does Community/review copies can work as well? 

Question, with only participating in the Appx N Jam, we have the opportunity to be on the Zine? or we need to do something extra? 0: