Well organized. Exceptional map. I like how there's two different paths into The Palm. Riddles feel like a good level of challenging. All together, a great adventure. Also, including 3 different motivations for character parties was great.
thanks so much for the kind words! Yeah the hooks were one of my favorite things to write, need to edit and give the clergywoman a name after the jam concludes though. Oversight there (I had one that made the Romeo & Juliet reference more explicit and it got swapped out in an edit for some reason)