Absolutely beautiful visuals - that last drawing at the end?? wow. Sound is hitting as well. My only feedback is it feels a bit tedious to me to walk back to the telescope after drawing each constellation since you don't do anything when you look. Perhaps you could have something to do there, or have the vision book next to the telescope. Congrats on great jam!
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Yea we were torn too on what to do here. Our original thought was to have it go straight outside to the constellations because it would be satisfying to see the fruits of your labor. But We were concerned that would make it too "gamey" and not as immersive. An alternative solution we have but couldn't do, is just have more interactive things to do in the observatory before you look out! Showing that things mechanically change within the observatory to allow you to see an immersive way how your success pans out! But ya not enough time to do it all! But it's a great piece of feedback and one we were critical of internally as well!