god, this is awesome. i love retrekking with a new tool set, the ability to blaze through areas that once left me jaded.
a personal preference of mine is that i'm usually pro-silent-protag so, sadly, the dialogue didn't do much for me. i think, with it or without it, would be super sick to add some NPCs around the ship as well as maybe a voice for the ship via intercom ala MOTHER from alien.
there's a LOT of potential here and i would love to see this game evolve, i hope you continue to fine tune it! regardless, amazing job! i'm very envious of what you were able to accomplish in such a short timespan.