You absolutely nailed the narrative and audio! The sprites could benefit from a little polishing, even though the artstyle is not really bad. The only flaw (in my opinion) is that I see a lot of these top down shooters in game jams and that drags the creativity a little (but not much, other things bumped it to 3 stars, which is still good). I've got an example to learn for the next Game Jam ;)