apostrophising out the k in know is just weird, you also use way too many commas, and in strange places breaking the flow of the sentence
Mmm I will consider it, thanks for the input!
I also assume the heartbeat wasn't supposed to stay in my left ear until the end.
It wasn't, but it has been fixed, thank you :P
I told Loling that he uses many commas sometimes, we will look into it. Thank you again!
