Really liked that it's all drawn by hand and the comic on the front page is really effective in expressing the vibe of the adventure.
Some of the text is a bit hard to read. And I actually couldn't understand how the mechanism works.
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Thanks for your feedback. My handwriting isnt the best, however sticking with the limitation I set for myself doing it all by hand I tried my best to make it readable.
The mechanism raises gates from the bottom of the sea that block off the arches of the trident, there by stopping the tide from entering the bay and reversing the flow of water. Instead the water raises up along the outside of the trident. Exactly how it works is only known by the dwarven and gnomish engineers that built it.
I hope you still found it entertaining
Thanks for the explanation, now it's more clear to me. I think I got a bit confused by the locks being inside of the chests. But now it makes sense.
Also I would say your handwriting is fine, it was more the orange background that made it hard for me to read.
Overall - really nice job here, I have enjoyed looking through it.
I have added a text file now with the relevant text, so it will be easier to read.
Yeah, the orange wasn't the best choice. Will change that for future work.
Im happy to hear that you enjoyed the creation, and Im glad to hear that the comic made an impression. Its the first time I have done a comic and my thought was to introduce the adventure and as you said express the vibe. The White Witch is actually the name of a miniature sculpted by Julie Guthrie for Grenadier miniatures in the fantasy personality line from the mid 1980s. I really like that line of miniatures and specifically Julie Guthries minis. There is a high probability that future npcs will be inspired by her miniatures.