I have added a text file now with the relevant text, so it will be easier to read.
Yeah, the orange wasn't the best choice. Will change that for future work.
Im happy to hear that you enjoyed the creation, and Im glad to hear that the comic made an impression. Its the first time I have done a comic and my thought was to introduce the adventure and as you said express the vibe. The White Witch is actually the name of a miniature sculpted by Julie Guthrie for Grenadier miniatures in the fantasy personality line from the mid 1980s. I really like that line of miniatures and specifically Julie Guthries minis. There is a high probability that future npcs will be inspired by her miniatures.
Thank you! Im happy it brought you joy. The inspiration comes from JP Coverts youtube channel and his drawings. He brings a lot of positivity to the roleplaying game hobby.
A text file! The obvious solution that didn't cross my mind. Thanks for the suggestion, I have added one now :)
Thanks for your feedback. I agree with the choice of orange not being the best. It was a limitation on the brush pens I had available. Wanting to do it by hand made changing color difficult, since there wasnt really any other colors to chose from. I had tried out orange on a separate paper and it look ok. But once I actually started coloring in the textboxes and I saw the first one I wasnt all happy with it. I was left with the choice of having different colors (could have tried another) or just run with my choice. If I do another one, I'll expand my brush pens and chose another color.
Happy that the vintage feel came across. I was aiming for some old school classic fantasy feel.
Thanks for your feedback. My handwriting isnt the best, however sticking with the limitation I set for myself doing it all by hand I tried my best to make it readable.
The mechanism raises gates from the bottom of the sea that block off the arches of the trident, there by stopping the tide from entering the bay and reversing the flow of water. Instead the water raises up along the outside of the trident. Exactly how it works is only known by the dwarven and gnomish engineers that built it.
