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Hey, thanks a ton for playing the game and for leaving such a thoughtful comment. Seriously, I really appreciate it.

I'm glad the visuals landed well for you. I get what you're saying about the story, it definitely shifts direction after the intro, and looking back, I agree it could’ve been more focused.

This was my first time really trying to tell a more advanced story in a game, so a lot of it was me experimenting and figuring things out as I went. I’m still learning how to tell stories in a way that feels more grounded and consistent. (I really didn’t want it to come off as clickbait or disrespectful)

I’ll definitely keep your advice in mind for future projects.

Thanks again for taking the time to write all this. It means a lot 🙏

Of course! I love indie games and I want to support you devs as much as I can!

Thanks for the response. I hope I wasn't coming off to badly, I did enjoy playing your game!

Tackling deeper stories is one of the hardest things to take on. There's so much more thinking and work that goes into crafting a narrative, than you'd expect.

I'm 25 now, and I didn't start realizing these storytelling nuances until pretty recently lol

Also, thank you for not taking my review in a bad way. I've met some devs, on this site, who really couldn't take criticism. But you're response has been awesome. And I think it really reflects how much you care about making games and connecting with your audience :)

Congratulations on your game's success! I'm excited to see what you work on next :)