This is the most creative entry I have played so far.
The idea is super cool and to see your story in the game, reminded me of The Beginner's Guide.
Using text blocks as platforms is a unique and cool idea. I would love to do more platforming in the game, so it is not just a running simulator.
But this is not required, most heavily narrative focused games are like this.
Great work and keep up with making games, I think you got potential :)