Had a great time with this! The characters feel very deep and intriguing and the art is so pretty. So excited for the full version! :D
Some feedback I want to give since this is a demo and I know it's still a work in progress that can be adjusted:
1. The text feels a bit small. If it could be a bit larger and maybe moved down just a hair I think that would help for readability. Especially because the text overlays with some dark parts of the leaf art in the text box.
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2. In Bad End 2 it says "Iilya's backpack is on the floor." but the characters are outside so it would be better to describe it as the 'ground' not a floor.
3. Players can trigger the handholding scene and then ask about his family (tell me about them) and as long as you don't press "Bedridden" you will get the "You're comin home ending". This is fine, but in that 'coming home' ending he invites you to the house and there is no text that alludes to the conversation where he said you couldn't come over. It might be good to add a trigger to that ending of -if "tell me about them" has been clicked add x dialogue-. Something like what you have in Bad End 2 where the character thinks "Oh I guess he changed his mind about me coming over"
If those are things you already are adjusting then ignore me haha
Really awesome job!
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thank you so so much!! i’m really glad you enjoyed it ૮₍ ´• ˕ • ₎ა and i really appreciate the thoughtful feedback too, it's super helpful!! i actually just adjusted the text size earlier today, so that’ll be updated in the next build :] i'll definitely tweak the rest, thank you again for playing!! ♡