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More of a bard than a squire myself haha...

Woah! This was your first dive into game jams? Really impressive stuff this! The pixel art style is really well made and each character having multiple dialogue portraits is also quite impressive! The writing as quite hilarious as well! I knew after that sticky note joke I was in for a treat. The music, while simple, gets the job done and helps bring together this charming little package! 

A bit of feedback. The camera was a bit dizzying to use at times. The directional movement plus the motion blur was a bit much and discouraged me wanting to run. 

The dialogue system seemed inconsistent when I was able to push the button to proceed and when I had to click the arrow. (Which itself got a touch monotonous after picking up several consecutive berries.)

The combat itself is a touch repetitive but gets the job done for essentially being the tutorial intro of a full game.


But overall there's a LOT of potential with this one! There's a great art direction and sense of humor that makes me eager to see if this becomes a full project in the future! 


Good game and good job! 


THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR YOUR COMMENT! I love comments that have constructive feedback with lots of positive key points like this one. 

To answer your question, Yes! it is our first time into game jams. I was tempted to join some before but always felt intimidated by the time... 2 or 3 days is not enough and if it was too long I'd prolly feel pressured by the time and unsatisfied with what I made. I really like how inbound structured this jam for beginners such as my team and myself it took A LOT of the pressure off. 

Gonna try our best to fix the Dialogue system as well as the camera! don't really know how I can spruce up combat for a game like this but thanks for your notes! because of comments like these our game will become 100x better